Poem - If I Could Paint Your Picture

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By one2get2no

This is a poem about a frustrated artist who longs to be able to paint a portrait which reflects his love for his lover.

If I could paint your picture,

Just one chance is all I’d need.

I’d paint your eyes in flecks of green,

And instead of books your eyes I’d read.

If I could paint your picture,

For the brush your hair I’d use.

And I’d run my fingers through your hair,

Whenever, I did choose.

If I could paint your picture,

Your lips would need extra care.

Colors of varying moods and hues, to invite

The kiss, which I’d place there.

If I could paint your picture,

You would then be near me every day.

Your picture would then become my bed,

And on your breasts, my head I’d lay.

If I could paint your picture,

Your smile would light my way.

Each brush stroke would then reflect,

All the words I’d ever say.

But I could never paint your picture,

Because no colors could ever show.

The depth that I see in you,

A closeness that grows and grows.

Comments

tonymac04 profile image

tonymac04 2 years ago

What a lovely tribute! Thanks for sharing.

Love and peace

Tony

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Jess Killmenow 2 years ago

A pretty poem. Thank you

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VioletSun Level 5 Commenter 2 years ago

This is so lovely! You painted a picture with words and conveyed your depth of love with the movement of your words.

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Lady_E Level 7 Commenter 2 years ago

A lovely romantic poem and a lovely picture. Cheers. :)

ralwus 2 years ago

beautiful expression of love.

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AEvans Level 7 Commenter 2 years ago

Oh Pretty and quite colorful!!! I truly enjoyed. :)

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ek ellis Level 1 Commenter 2 years ago

very visual poetry, I like it

Clara 2 years ago

Beautiful

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one2get2no Hub Author 2 years ago

Thank you...

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Stan Fletcher Level 2 Commenter 23 months ago

This one is really great. Vivid images. Glad I found you.

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one2get2no Hub Author 23 months ago

Thank you Stan.

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sligobay Level 6 Commenter 16 months ago

The metaphor of the art of painting for the inadequacy of romantic love to express the true depth of one's passion and commitment may not be novel and yet is originally invoked by your imagery. Thank you for loving so deeply.

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one2get2no Hub Author 16 months ago

Thank you...

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